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Hold on my Heart

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Hold on my Heart.

Silent dreams
that run around inside of my heart
Foolish schemes
Posted on the chart

Promises
that mean so much to me
Long losses
Wars different now it seams

Jets are loud
As they fly across the darkened sky
Hearts sink down
We all start to cry.

Hold on my heart
Hold on my heart
Now we depart
Now that it is darkened

You are gone
While a bloody war is being fought
with just a song
and a lesson to be taught

Its over
And you're never going to come back
Because
Of the attack.

Hold on my heart.
Hold on my heart.
Now we depart
Now that it is over

Children play
Laughing while the sun is going away
Today
will be their day.

I will watch
As I’m standing here in the cold.
If only I were them
Little would I know.

Hold on my heart.
Hold on my heart.
Now we depart
Now that I am dying.
Just something I typed up.
It orgianally started out as a song, but it works either way.;)
The poem is basically the feelings of a young woman who's brother goes to war, and as you can tell, dies. :(
If you're curiouse as to what some other things might mean, go ahead and send me a note. I'll be sure to write you back.
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jk-dk's avatar
I find some of the word choices and metaphors intriguing in this :) I also love the general meaning