Johto Girl Chapter 1 page 4

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Yay, page four is finally up! I worked really hard on this page. I know it's not perfect, but I think it's my best page yet! Thanks to the wonderful feedback I've received, I've made some changes. First, the boxes are not free-hand anymore. Secondly, the word bubbles and narrative boxes are outlined. Thank you so much for all the helpful feedback I've gotten!

Awww, isn't Meowth cute? It seriously is one of my favorite pokemon.
And now you get to see Kim's parents!
Oh, by the way, this takes place in modern times, but since the people of Arborville live up in trees, I figured that it would be pretty hard to get a dryer and washer machine up in their houses, so they have a village washer-woman! And that woman is Kim's mom!
So guys, what did you think? Comments are loved! Constructive criticism is welcome, however I'm not looking for too strong a critique on this one. Unless something really stands out that I should know about, I'm not too worried. Thank you for understanding.

Would you like me to return the favor? For every comment I get on this, I will go to your gallery and give you a comment as well! If there is something in particular you would like me to comment on, let me know in a note, otherwise I'll just choose on my own! It's my way of saying thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts!


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